Novel... Should I Continue? VERY LONG!!!?
Part One
My enthusiasm pounded in my chest, my throat was burning, ignited by my distraught gasps for air. I clenched my teeth, as the side of my face throbbed with disquiet, slowly ebbing away. I took a deep gust, and slowly let it out I watched
it's very descriptive but i don't understand what it's about. It helps me visualize the scenery and everything. it gives readers a vibe. you should persist in but that's only if you want to.





