Anyone want to rate my story (if you have time on your hands?) Please? Not too long...?
Do you remember my story so far took off too early? This is the VERY first part, so did it have action right away? Thanks so much! (By the way, odd things happen later on because she is a witch, but the good sort. Throughout the story, she is pretty
Its extraordinary... but aren't the names a bit American-Mickey-Mouse-Teeny?
Why can't they have rather, normal names? The way your going, I wouldnt be supried to see a Mary-Kate or a Britney!
Also, you have a slight problem

The other sister, who is three and a half, is pottering about the kitchen singing snatches of Les Misérables, blowing raspberries and urgent a biscuit as I type. Flinty exponents of the “nappy curriculum” might recognize that her penmanship isn't